1. To be honest it doesn’t affect me much, because I know it’s a mere story. Even thou the situations are real, there’s still the fact that its not really happening to the character, its an example of what happens to real people in real life situations. But I do understand how a person could be affected by what there reading, if you can relate to the text then the book shouldn’t be hard to understand. The story gives me more instruction rather than affection, because it tells you the different things people do, in there lifestyle or in there everyday job. In the story im reading there are wrestlers, that use syringes to suck the blood out of there ear when it swells up and fills with blood. To me that’s instruction rather than affection, because the author is explaining what wrestlers do in different situations. There were porn stars who had sex on stage amongst a crowd, to me it’s the different things explaining the character, that gives me instruction rather than affection, or whether or not it affected me.
2. I would take out the random shifts in the story, I would make it stick to one topic rather every other chapter being different than the last. For example the book started out with porn, then one chapter later it started talking about wrestling, I believe the opening pages in the book should be what the entire book is based on. Its already boring to read, so reading something that doesn’t necessarily suit your fancy makes even harder.